Carlynx
21 May 06 - 01.06am |
I dont like all of those black lines youve put in there. the one one the top lip makes it look like it sticks out and doesnt blend. the two smal ones on the left side of her face make her look like shes straining herself somehow. and lastly the now lines shouldnt be black, they should be a darker shade of the skin... other than that, good job. I like the clothes.
Oh, and the neck. the neck is too thick, it should go skinny to thick from higher to lower, and the chin should be smoother. |
okiexxdokie
27 Oct 05 - 02.19am
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she looks mannish. but the clothes are perfect. |
lilleece
13 Oct 05 - 08.58pm |
I dont like the skin tone in general pic better colors. Good clothing |
Solitaire
3 Sep 05 - 01.51am |
I loooove the lips! You seemed to have put more detail into the lips and eyes than the rest :P I would probably suggest being a little more consistent by putting a little bit more detail into the rest of her :P
I'm not too fond of the lines on her left cheek. They were probably there in the original image, so maybe you could still keep them there by shading instead of lines? I also think you weighted the lines on her nose too heavily. Her nose is basically at the center of her face and the heavy outlines make them the center of attention.
Oooh and I also love the sweater and shirt!!! They look just like hers :P
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Thank you :) I am most happy with the clothes too, though text is easy, I think it looks exactly like hers. That's a good idea to shade instead of use the lines, I will redo them when I get the chance, I was originally going for a cartooney effect, but ended up not really (it's way harder than I thought :o) So the lines do look out of place :( Thanks again for your input, I appreciate it :)
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Waiting
3 Sep 05 - 01.18am |
I agree with seven, you went a little TOO much into detail on thoes wrinkles ;). It's good. though!
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Thank you for your input :)
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carolinabarajas
2 Sep 05 - 11.54pm
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I love the lips. Good job!!!
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Seven
2 Sep 05 - 11.19pm
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I'd get rid of the lines under her eyes. They look like wrinkles and she looks very old. XD I LOVE her clothes, they came out really well. Especially the writing on the shirt. |
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