julie
24 Aug 05 - 06.39pm |
I think you could have shaded the bra. The shading looks a bit weird, especially on her left arm (her left, our right). There is also no shadow on the skin where the tie is. It looks more like it was tattooed onto her instead of her wearing it.
The hair looks really good, and the eyes could use some eyelashes. |
julie
24 Aug 05 - 12.29pm |
i agree with marta |
marta
24 Aug 05 - 10.01am
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I really like your skin and hair, but I think you could add more shades on her bra and her eyes look different (ofc If that wasnt the effect you wanted) |
Vicki
24 Aug 05 - 09.31am
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I like it...the hair is gorgeous :) |