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Self portrait
My first vexel in five months. It turned out ok. The hair is not my best, but I was too tired when I started it so. The eyes aren't good either, the iris is all weird, other than that I think I'm happy with it.
Please do give me tips on how to improve it!
Submitted by lisa_mg on 02nd January 2006.
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daisy1645
7 Oct 06 - 03.06am
It's fabulous!!!!! I wish I could do anything half as good...
Your purdy too, ya kinda look like Sara Paxton.
gemmalou__x
24 Apr 06 - 04.19pm
gemmalou__x
pure perfection!!!!!!!!!!!
ur sooooo pretty!!!
-x-
Sayuri
8 Apr 06 - 02.41pm
Sayuri
you're so beautiful! as for improving, maybe more definition to the tip of the nose? it looks as if it just melds into the right cheek.. and we don't want that, LOL. the skin and jewelry are fantastiques mon amie!
bullyboop
10 Mar 06 - 05.19pm
Can I see the original picture please?
arenys92
1 Mar 06 - 12.32pm
arenys92
THIS IS YOU??! i thought she's an actress .. hehe you're pretty

'you're beautiful,you're beautiful
it's true' - james blunt ^0^
oneteaspoon
18 Jan 06 - 02.59am
oneteaspoon
amazing! I love it! Im faveing it for sure :)
Fallon
11 Jan 06 - 03.51am
I LOVE the shading, eyes and the necklace. Awesome job :)
karyn
7 Jan 06 - 03.23pm
omg u r sooooo pretty ;-) faves lol <3
Rick
3 Jan 06 - 06.19am
Rick
Very pretty! You did a wonderful job, the dress looks awsome, I wish you would've had more in the picture, but that's ok. I believe you did a fantastic job on you portrait, your eye's came out beautiful. Luv your pic, hope you enjoyed your holiday's. And welcome back! **bows to the Lady**
Cadence
3 Jan 06 - 01.04am
Cadence
i love the eyes, eye lashes and eyebrows. very well done :)
Echoia
2 Jan 06 - 11.42am
Echoia
This is beautiful. The tip of the nose/front of the nose has no real definition. Hmm. I would make smoother curves, more gradual contours (like the cheekbone). That's when I'm looking at the technical parts, though, after taking in the beauteousness of it ; )
yellowschwester
2 Jan 06 - 08.40am
yellowschwester
I love the skin and your necklace and your lips. Although the lips have kind of a hard corner. I guess you could work on that. Making transitions smoother. ( ; I really like the eyebrows as well, and your eyes look good too but the right eye ( your right eye - we see it on the left side d; ) looks a little off. Like it's a little too "high" ? Don't know if you get what I mean but your iris doesn't seem round but a little more in an egg-shape. But that's a rather too detailed and not of great importance critique.
In my opinion you really could spend more time on doing the hair, though. Not exactly more time because I don't know how long it took you but put some more detail into it!
Anyways, this is a very great vexel. The 5 months break didn't let your talent disapprear. LOL
Natalie
2 Jan 06 - 07.29am
Natalie
You're prettyyyy!! I love the skin tone, it makes me think of honey. But what doesn't make me think of something with sugar? x_x no, really, it's gorgeous! *favourites* I like the angle toooo.
Trinidadhunni
2 Jan 06 - 05.02am
Trinidadhunni
The skin shading is great..hmm how to improve on eyes, perhapes add the pink thing that we all have xD and well the hair, your bang thingies they look like they just stuck there and dont' come out of your head xD lol but I really like your shading no doubt
fromage_
2 Jan 06 - 02.37am
fromage_
This is really great the ears are so fab, I actually like the nose, Ive seen some photograph thats so bright the you could hardly see the nose, thats what you get with the pose. My only tip for you is the little bags in the front..you should put it under the main hair . It looks awkard like that.
avalon
2 Jan 06 - 01.54am
avalon
Your nose sort of disappears into your face like Raelynn said. You could also try making the area around the nose a little bit darker. You're beautiful!
Linda
2 Jan 06 - 12.53am
Linda
A self portrait? Wow you are stunning! Your vexel is beautiful, I love the color scheme and the face/skin shading.
Raelynn
2 Jan 06 - 12.47am
Raelynn
I think its beautiful. Very nice simple layers and I really like the pose. My only advice, and this is something even I have trouble with and look out for, is that the nose blends into the face a bit. I find sometimes putting some tiny layers of a darker tone around the edge can help make it pop out a bit more, give it more depth.
Manda
2 Jan 06 - 12.47am
Manda
i love it! Very beautiful. The lips are cute :)
Vee
2 Jan 06 - 12.22am
i think hair is good. i never can do eyes like that. i like it xD
Azeriné
2 Jan 06 - 12.09am
wow I like it alot

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