Ok i didnt know what to call it so i appoligise for the title
I remember where i got the stock now... the gorgeous Mumbo-stock from deviant you can find her stock here http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/28378244/
So yer i decided to tryout a different style here with lineart etc i think i did ok not sure though
It took me two days um n i think i like it !
Tell me what you htink :D xx
OOO im proud of the eyes its the first that ive actually made look alright !!!
First of all, I like it. :) You did a good job on the line art, it looks natural. However, the eye (which is nicely done) seems to be floating in the face, there's not shadow around it. Like somebody stuck it on the face. :P I think the whole face shading could use just a little bit more contrast anyway, to make it look more natural. Or something. It doesn 't need much.. just some vague shadows/highlights. Also maybe you could add a line to where the upper and lower lip meet? I think that would go better with the other lineart.. lol sorry I'm such a nitpicker.. I really do like it, but I always tend to give some CC with my comments. ;D
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Aw thanks !! Yer i do agree with you i think im going to change the things you've said a little as the face shading doe look a little bland lol x